Feedback and Revisions

             After presenting Michael and I's film "The Girl" we got a lot of different feedback. The class had positive and negative remarks. They also suggested some revisions to be made.

              For starters, our positive feedback began with how clear our film was. The shots quality were very high which made the audience enjoy watching it more. Also, the shots themselves were very smooth and "shot very well." The class said that the color saturation of all the shots was very pleasing to the eye since they were so clear. The class followed the story line very well and enjoyed Michael and I's acting and characters. They also said our use of incidental music and sound effects were very effective and appropriate. Lastly, the class said the foreshadowing in the beginning of the film worked out really well and looked good towards the end of the film. It wrapped it up nicely and kept the audience entertained the entire time.

               The class made a few suggestions regarding some changes that could be made in our film. The first suggestion was changing the font used to a different, bigger and more effective size. The original was too small and did not really impress the audience. The class also suggested lowering the background noise on some of the films shots'. The wind was a little loud in one of the shots in the beginning and the audience said that took them out of the scene just a little.